For students that are about to graduate, it is better for them to finish an intensive research project on an interesting topic and then write a paper on this topic or to finish an internship which can let students learn some business skills.
University isn't a fresh word for human beings in this era, and there are always differences about the higher education between western countries and eastern countries, especially lie in the last year in university. And with the globalization, a new debate emerged: which is more appropriate for last-year students, finishing a research with interesting topic or finishing an internship? Frankly speaking, I strong believe that it's a wise way for students who are going to step into the society to join in internships.
First off, practical experience is necessary for certain majors, so it's imperative to finish an internship. To be specific, there are majors place more value into internship experience, as those majors value student's ability of applying what they learned into practice. In a way, the internship is the most efficient way to examine your occupational ability. In western educational system, they called this internship education, which means the practical experience are as important as the theoretical knowledge. Business courses is a typical major that value internship a lot. No mater you specialize in what courses, marketing and management, human resource management or hotel management, all the undergraduate courses associated with business carried the internship year. According to the official statistics, over 90 percent of the UK universities have established the internship program, those universities cooperate with several corresponding companies in order to provide their students with the opportunities of practicing. Hence, this fact revealed that how much value put on the internship, as it's the best way to apply the knowledge in the textbooks into the practice.
Equally significant, an internship brings students about a more promising career, especially those who are going to step into the society. To illustrate, owing to the high-quality internship, undergraduates possess great many practical skills, and eventually receiving dream offers. An internship is the real work place with fierce competition. Beyond the campus, students are required to learn much more skills more than they thought, like social skills, cooperative skills, self-management abilities etc. Fortunately, all those skills can be learned and practiced in the internship. So, with the practical experience accumulated during the internship, students not only enrich their resumes, but also be more confident to their future development. Besides, a great many companies take the internship experience into consideration as they recruit new members. In that case, those students will take advantage of the internship, saying that compared with other candidates without internship experience, they are more competitive and are likely to be competent to the opening positions. Thus, there are greater possibilities of receive offers from their dream employers left for him.
However, I'm not totally denying the accessibility of finishing a research project on an interesting topic and then write a paper. Beyond doubt, writing papers is a good way to practice student's integrated abilities, the combination of academic skills, writing skills and the patient of taking research, particularly for those who are pursuing advanced studies in certain domains. Whereas the great majority are striving for mundane life styles, they somehow will step into the society, and writing a paper for most undergraduate is a waste of time and energy. In light of this, it might be more advisable for last-year students to finish an internship.
In a nutshell, according to what I've mentioned above, it is reasonable to do a research and writing a paper make a sense for few students who are pursuing academic development. However, as the main trend of upcoming graduates is stepping into the society and regarding to their career development, the minority is supposed to subordinate to the majority: most students are supposed to participate in internships.
- For students that are about to graduate it is better for them to finish an intensive research project on an interesting topic and then write a paper on this topic or to finish an internship which can let students learn some business skills 73
- Some people think university students should be taught in small class which means professor knows the names of his her students others think large classes with more students are better Which one do you think is better 73
- When you are assigned an important presentation at work or in school you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day or wait until you have a good idea 73
- Some people think university students should be taught in small class which means professor knows the names of his her students others think large classes with more students are better Which one do you think is better 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
University isnt a fresh word for human beings in this e...
^^^^
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...riate for last-year students, finishing a research with interesting topic or finishing an ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... internship? Frankly speaking, I strong believe that its a wise way for students who ar...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...Frankly speaking, I strong believe that its a wise way for students who are going t...
^^^
Line 3, column 1106, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ow much value put on the internship, as its the best way to apply the knowledge in ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... in the textbooks into the practice. Equally significant, an internship brings stude...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...eam employers left for him. However, Im not totally denying the accessibility o...
^^
Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ip. In a nutshell, according to what Ive mentioned above, it is reasonable to do...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, frankly, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3361.0 1977.66487455 170% => OK
No of words: 605.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55537190083 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12146736329 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499173553719 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 1055.7 618.680645161 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6637921984 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.269230769 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2692307692 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360740014494 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105125840654 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913170544176 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224721127747 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104436168848 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 86.8835125448 188% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.