to success in future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school
These days, one of the most critical issues in everyone's life is how to prepare himself to find a satisfactory occupation that can be supportive for his future. So many factors are available that people should try to achieve them to gain their proper job. Some people believe that being an expert and having a high education is enough to possess a promising career, but by a wide range of society changes, it is not sufficient property. There are various factors for finding an excellent job. The most vital feature in every company and career is needed to make a good relationship with others. I feel this way because of two reasons.
First, in recent decades, the big portion of companies' success relies on people. It means the consumers will determine a company will succeed or not. So the bosses found it as a most important factor to have a good relationship with their customers. As a result, in this competitive marketing, managers not only have to attend to the quality of their products but also they should try to hire employees who are strong in making a connection with people. Because of this fact, a lot of famous businessmen are of the opinion that using people who are skillful in relation with people is more and more essential than hiring educational people.
Secondly, one of the essential factors in gaining a job is related to the effects on the managers at the first meeting. So many tips exist that searchers for a career have to do in their first interview that influences their acceptance or rejection in that work. So having a good impression on bosses is depend on people's ability to relate well. For instance, my brother is a professional architect, but he is so weak in connecting with others. When he went to speak to a company to gain his interesting job, he was not able to earn that. At the same time, a person who came to interview after him with a lower degree possessed the job because of his good impact on the manager.
In conclusion, in this modern world, the ability to have a good relationship with others is getting more important, especially in the process of finding a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...o having a good impression on bosses is depend on peoples ability to relate well. For ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66223404255 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6598497198 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8357575116 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169112425885 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530966148315 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649550408818 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105097177867 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260719083714 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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