People have different thoughts and ideas regarding whether the supermarket should only sell food that is from their country. Certainly, some people argue that food must be imported from other countries. In my perspective, I strongly believe that selling food from other counties benefits the supermarkets and I will explain the reasons in this essay.
To begin with, there is a vast number of foreigners in a particular country. That being said, a supermarket should have international food because of the people from their own country will yearn their nation's food. My own experience demonstrates this reality. When I was in Malaysia to study, I often wanted to eat my country's food. So I went to the local supermarket to buy Korean instant noodles. Eating them made my day when I was feeling down. Besides, some immigrants do not enjoy the taste of local delicacies as individuals from another country has a different appetite. Therefore, more International food should be stocked inside the supermarket so that anyone can have a greater option of buying food
Moreover, importing foods from another country will raise the store's income. Research by the University of Harvard shows that a meat merchant in Malaysia who only sells beef from their country has less than $1000 revenue a month. While, the other merchant that sells meat that came from abroad such as New Zeland, Australia, and Japan has an income of $4000 per month. As a result, the shop can earn more profits because the quality of meat is better from other countries like Japan. Additionally, Japan has a better breeding system due to the advancement of technology so the cow's meat should taste better. Besides, nations that import and export food can increase their country's economy.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that retail shop must bring in products from overseas so that every individual regardless of their country have more opportunities to buy their mainland's sources. Also, the profit of the store will surge exponentially.
Moreover, importing foods from another country will raise the store's income. Research by the University of Harvard shows that a meat merchant in Malaysia who only sells beef from their country has less than $1000 revenue a month. While, the other merchant that sells meat that came from abroad such as New Zeland, Australia, and Japan has an income of $4000 per month. As a result, the shop can earn more profits because the quality of meat is better from other countries like Japan. Additionally, they have a better breeding system so the cow's meat should taste better. Besides, nations that import and export food can increase their country's economy.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that retail shop must bring in products from overseas so that every individual regardless of their country have more opportunities to buy their mainland's sources. Also, the profit of the store will surge exponentially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08768267223 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65276375154 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.369519832985 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1153044203 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7307692308 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4230769231 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363572021937 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115040668189 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862814453425 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223768888524 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651988099074 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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