Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have, but, in fact, it's a good quality for a person to have.
There are several decisions that people are required to make every day, ranging from dealing with trivial things, like what to wear or eat in every morning, to significant affairs, including choosing a job or running a policy. The time spent on making different decisions varies greatly. From my perspective, when it comes to make an important decision, it is a desirable quality that people take a lot of time on it.
As for students, the most important thing for them is to choose one university, which can be the turn point in their life. To make such an important decision, they need to search for the information about the university they desire to go, including the location, the professors, curriculum and other aspects about the university. It is the whole process that requires students to spend much time on it. For example, when I was required a choose one university, knowing the importance of this decision for me, I just embarked on an extensive research, sorting out a list of universities, checking whether they can provide students with dorms, finding out whether they are located in the big cities or not, etc. Researching all these things actually took me nearly half a month. Eventually, thanks to my extensive research, I finally chose one university which was located near a big city and provided an opportunity for students to live on campus.
As for businessman, the most important thing for them is to have a successful career. In order to achieve this, they have to identify the potential risk of their commercial behaviors and avoid making mistakes in their strategies. All these things can not be done within a short period of time in case they would suffer from the loss of potential income and investment. For example, traders have to investigate which country can be their reliable trading partners; those who sell electrical devices have to research who their potential consumers are and what can most attract them; people who work on finance have to search for the information about nearly every stock’s company. Had it not been for those long time spent work, success would never be ensured.
Admittedly, a voice arises that people who make a swift decision are able to pursue their goals early so that they are more likely to be successful. Ironically, making a immediate decision just increases the likelihood of working on the wrong path especially in those important situations.
In a nutshell, taking a lot of time to make a decision is a good quality for people in different stages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e things can not be done within a short period of time in case they would suffer from the loss...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, so, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92757009346 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72657344827 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1816250483 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322812387767 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11526988451 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969424960604 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207627125561 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103413616069 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.