Competition among friends usually has a negative impact on friendship.
Without a shadow of doubt, competing with peers or friends plays a pivotal role in the development of friendship. It can not denied that conflicts, aroused by competition, sometimes hurt the friendship, and it might mislead impressionable people to generate the opinion that competition is not conducive to maintain friendship. When it comes to my perspective, as far as the memorable moments created by competing, the mutual understanding of each other, and the reflecting on themselves are concerned, I strongly hold the opinion that the friendship is not deteriorated by the process of competition.
The first reason worth mentioning is that having competitors literally create unforgettable moments, which can be cherished by both sides. Take my brother and me,who regard each other as his opponent, as example. Since our childhood, our parents have forced us to compete with each other, such as struggling to get higher grades than the other one, beating against the other one when playing table tennis, running faster in the race, etc. All these activities consist of our memories about other, being cherished by us. Whenever we talk about our childhood, these unforgettable experiences are surfacing. Had it been our parents who prevent us from competing, our memories about each other would not be so clear, and thus our bond would not be strengthened so tightly.
Moreover, another prominent reason is that competition enables rivals to understand mutually. In order to beat contender, one of them has to learn about the other side’s advantages and disadvantages. On the other hand, through numerous games or tests, the rival’s characters and superiority are reflected. Knowing what is lack of, both sides are able to ask each other on how to improve themselves. During the process of overcoming their shortcomings and maintaining competitive edge, everyone can benefit from competition and thus enhance mutual understanding. In this way, virtuous competition, which promote friendship, is created.
A voice arises that conflicts is unavoidable in competition, which exert a negative influence on the maintaining of friendship. However, this statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be scrutinized meticulously. Admittedly, conflicts can be inevitable during competitions. Nonetheless, it is the attitude that helps them to bond with each other. After conflicts, both sides are inclined to reflect on themselves about whether they have done something wrong that outrage rivals objectively. Eventually, holding more objective views on themselves, they would apologize to each other and correct mistakes.Through the process of conflicts and apologize, everyone knows each other better and their friendship might be enhanced.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned before, I firmly believe that competition is beneficial for strengthening friendship. While there are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand eyes’, I firmly believe my opponents will yield after being shown to my article.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
...e development of friendship. It can not denied that conflicts, aroused by competition,...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...ed by both sides. Take my brother and me,who regard each other as his opponent, as e...
^^^^
Line 4, column 634, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Through
...gize to each other and correct mistakes.Through the process of conflicts and apologize,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53533190578 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13596096187 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552462526767 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3865607606 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.391304348 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3043478261 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111257241831 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361642795459 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509007575989 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766067333746 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542629432305 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.