Teachers are a paramout factor foryoung people education. Good education enable people to get a dream future career. The quetion is, whether, universities should speend money on salaries for universities professors or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, I believe that universities should hire professors and give them a high salary. My opnion is built on many reason. In this essay. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this supject.
First, and foremost, Money is a main concern for any individual. If professor get a good salary, they will feel comfortable and they will concentrate in their performance. This will enable him to introduce his lesson to their students perfectly. As a result, student will improve their academic acheivement. And, this is a main gool of education process. This is real example from my life, In our country, government pay very little wage to professors. Therefore, teachers will not pay attention to acadimic performance, because it is not lucurative to them. and most of them try to find another job which is worthed.
Second, there is a crucial benefit beyond hiring professors with good salary. one advantage from doing that as I said in previous paraghraph, this will improve student achivements., then they will graguated with high score. This will elevate university reputation among the world, Therefore more student will attend this schools from differant countries, Furthermore, school will get alot of money more than that they spent for salaries. For example, All student know how Harvard university is a famus one and all student hope to enroll in it.
Inconclusion, the statement is as persuasive as with it stands, This is based on exposition which are mention above about importance of high salary for professors.
Teachers are a paramout factor foryoung people education. Good education enable people to get a dream future career. The quetion is, whether, universities should speend money on salaries for universities professors or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, I believe that universities should hire professors and give them a high salary. My opnion is built on many reason. In this essay. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this supject.
First, and foremost, Money is a main concern for any individual. If professor get a good salary, they will feel comfortable and they will concentrate in their performance. This will enable him to introduce his lesson to their students perfectly. As a result, student will improve their academic acheivement. And, this is a main gool of education process. This is real example from my life, In our country, government pay very little wage to professors. Therefore, teachers will not pay attention to acadimic performance, because it is not lucurative to them. and most of them try to find another job which is worthed.
Second, there is a crucial benefit beyond hiring professors with good salary. one advantage from doing that as I said in previous paraghraph, this will improve student achivements., then they will graguated with high score. This will elevate university reputation among the world, Therefore more student will attend this schools from differant countries, Furthermore, school will get alot of money more than that they spent for salaries. For example, All student know how Harvard university is a famus one and all student hope to enroll in it.
Inconclusion, the statement is as persuasive as with it stands, This is based on exposition which are mention above about importance of high salary for professors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8652711976 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4787583419 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.380952381 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0952380952 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355495012137 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109352885289 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124442643308 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225730103331 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23031470152 0.0645574589148 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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