Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

By and large, teachers have had a far-reaching effect on society by teaching. These educated people would enter into the governmental systems and would play their rule. Its importance leads to some controversy; some people want to know how a teacher regarded nowadays. On statement in this case that is often brought up is that teacher nowadays receive well-regard from people and government, in contrast, I personally repudiate it and believe that teachers receive more regard in the past. In the lines to follow, I will investigate two reasons to shed light on my response.
One of the paramount reasons which deserves to be mention for is that in the past, societies were bereft of well-educated people. Most of the people were illiterate and regarded teacher as an important individual. Furthermore, teachers had a second job. Take, for example, in Iran and before the revolution that is referred to as Enghelab, teachers were as well police in villages. People in the village referred them when they had some controversy over farming land and other problems. Nowadays, by developing electronic and Internet, people are getting information from different routes. Therefore, teachers no longer are the only source of information. Besides, the educated people have aroused and the jobs have gotten specialized.
Another reason coming to mind is that by passing time governments decided to get some departments the non-profitable organization. Making money is the main target of all these organizations. Therefore, teachers have lost many of their free services received before. Take, for example, in Iran some educational and healthcare organization has been sold to some non-profit organizations. The reasons that they did this was that Iran is suffering from international sanction and many organization have been broken out. Therefore, the government had needed money to compensate deficit in the budget. Consequently, teachers lost their free services that had been provided by the government.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40255591054 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04492119448 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2758635044 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.55 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162639465726 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483590245287 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381684781338 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114746102951 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412986048959 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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