Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be
allowed.
Most companies use television advertising to attract customers to new products and to exhibit the quality of their items, But it seems that this tool used by companies can bring some disadvantages to young children, and result in consequences, which are difficult to remedy. This essay will examine the consequences of television advertising to young children and will support the move of banning television advertising to young children as a good decision.
Forbidding television advertising to young children holds three reasons. First of all, young children health's is affected by what they see on TV. Before diving further, most television advertisements broadcast the advertising items of food, especially sweets. So children are attracted by these sweets that cause tooth decay; also by eating many sweets children get weight and obesity and as a result, their health deteriorates. All of these arguments above demonstrate how the health of children is destroyed and worsened as well as children would like to consume harmful foods, which they see on television.
Next, frustration characterizes children who like to watch television advertisements. To explain more, children possess a brittle brain that anything counts in their minds; insignificant things can make them angry or happy. So the children's desire not being satisfied makes children wrath because they didn't get what they clime for. Most of the time children force their parents to satisfy their desire, whereas what they clime for can be bad for them. once disappointed to get what they expected; they become more nervous.
Finally, children prone to television advertising develop luxury tastes. Many television advertisements like to broadcast expensive products,diverse types of items, all of which are meant to attract customers, especially young children. One can notice this attitude toward young children during the spree; they often claim expensive products to buy. The more luxury tastes are cherished, the more waste takes place; as a result, children lost the sense of economy just because they need to get what they see in television advertisements.
With these reasons stated above, government and parents should go forward and forbid television advertising directed toward young children to escape the consequences.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51694915254 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95180439036 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1090786056 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.882352941 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326439122529 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127717127344 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838911990333 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216839526476 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641069648411 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.