Over the past fifty years,our world has gone through enormous changes, on both a societal and an individual level. However, some timeless social norms have remained constant regardless of the transformation in the external environment. One of these is courtesy. Even in today's world where everyone is living in the fast lane, crude behavior and indelicate words are never justified by the situation.
In a classroom setting, there is no reason for a teacher to act disrespectfully towards his or her students. Instead, it is with consideration and patience that better teaching and learning results can be achieved.
The reason for this is obvious. Disobedient and rebellious as some unruly students appear to be, they are actually sensitive souls who care a lot about their teachers.In fact, in my experience, such students are only feigning rebellion in order to draw the teacher's attention to himself. It is not unlike the way an infant will cry in order to bring the mother closer. In this regard, a teacher who exercises courtesy in the classrooms and expresses appreciation for every student will find that those students that give them the greatest headaches will become totally changed and show more initiative for learning both in and after classes. In contrast, rudeness only makes things go from bad to worse by discouraging students and instigating them to give up studies altogether.
In the workplace, one's ability to contain anger and manage complaints is of great importance to his or her career success. It is even more critical than individual competition, ambition, or tenacity. However committed and proficient a person is, she needs her coworkers'support in order to deal with increasingly complicated and demanding work tasks.Therein lies the importance of politeness in the workplace. Imagine a man who is petulant and unappreciative toward his coworkers. His existence is a curse that spreads a negative spirit and ruins his coworkers'sense of belonging. It can even foster ill-will and mistrust among team members. We can expect that whatever he could get from the people around him will never be anything other than back-stabbing: his coworkers would do anything to thwart his efforts and perhaps even drive him out on the street in search of a new job. Obviously, politeness will never be outdated, if a person aims to be preeminent in his/her career.
When it comes to family life, parents are supposed to be kind and gracious towards their children. Their encouragement and patience weigh a lot in the mental development of children and the formation of such positive character traits as persistence and confidence. For example, when children fail to build the toy buildings they desire, parents should not lose temper and blame their children for weakness and fragility but should encourage children with great patience and a good attitude to wipe out tears, collect the messed up toy bricks, and start all over again. In this way, children can know it is important to be strong in front of failures and to be confident and then retry and persist until success.
In conclusion, politeness is a prerequisite for people to have a satisfying home life and a fulfilling career.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , our
Over the past fifty years,our world has gone through enormous changes...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...uls who care a lot about their teachers.In fact, in my experience, such students a...
^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...feigning rebellion in order to draw the teachers attention to himself. It is not unlike ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng them to give up studies altogether. In the workplace, ones ability to contain ...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... studies altogether. In the workplace, ones ability to contain anger and manage com...
^^^^
Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ual competition, ambition, or tenacity. However committed and proficient a person is, s...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therein
...ly complicated and demanding work tasks.Therein lies the importance of politeness in th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 686, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... expect that whatever he could get from the people around him will never be anything other than back-...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12022900763 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96533384221 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574427480916 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1040793845 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.791666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120499877039 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324414403554 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478181325709 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529916950912 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047429945236 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , our
Over the past fifty years,our world has gone through enormous changes...
^^^^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...uls who care a lot about their teachers.In fact, in my experience, such students a...
^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...feigning rebellion in order to draw the teachers attention to himself. It is not unlike ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng them to give up studies altogether. In the workplace, ones ability to contain ...
^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... studies altogether. In the workplace, ones ability to contain anger and manage com...
^^^^
Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ual competition, ambition, or tenacity. However committed and proficient a person is, s...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therein
...ly complicated and demanding work tasks.Therein lies the importance of politeness in th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 686, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... expect that whatever he could get from the people around him will never be anything other than back-...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12022900763 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96533384221 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574427480916 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1040793845 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.791666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120499877039 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324414403554 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478181325709 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529916950912 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047429945236 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.