There is no reason to be impolite (rude) to another person
It goes without saying in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human social relationships and how they tolerate with each other is as immense asset in creating their world in life. In this vein, how impoliteness affects people's life create some debate among individuals. While some people believe that there is no need to be impolite with others, many stand on the other side of the continuum believing otherwise. As far as I concerned I assume that politeness is significantly beneficial in everybody's life. My reasons to substantiate my viewpoint will be elaborated hereunder.
First and without a shadow of a doubt, being impolite cause has a detrimental effect on your friendship. Creating a perfect relationship with individuals needs lots of time and consideration. Needless to say, if you try to act rude, nobody shows respect to you as well. As a result finding good friends, helping you at any cost or be on your side when encounter problems in your life need politeness. To put this notion into a vivid picture compare my self with my cousin. My cousin is a rude person, always says bad words. He thinks that everybody must serve his orders and provides him with anything he wants. As a result, he has not been able to construct a beneficial friendship relation with people. Nowadays he has some mental problems since he is significantly lonely. However, comparing my self to him, I always tried to be polite and effective in relationship with people. This special aspect helps me to find a few close friends, helping me in my life crisis. When I feel depressed or anxious, they back up me helping me to find my self and my aims in life again. If there I didn't have close friend, I wouldn't able to survive from this hectic today's life,
Another significant point to be mentioned is that politeness helps people to establish a strong connection in the work area. Although some people complain about their work manager, stating that leaders always force the to do things they don't like, so they want to be rude to conserve their rights workplace, I think otherwise. Politeness in work provides employees with job security. It's true that they might be in some pressure from their boss, however, when employees try to tolerate them they can gradually progress in the workplace and get higher positions. Politeness not only provide job security but only also it can provide them with higher income. The higher position you have in a workplace the higher money you will get every month and more money means less stress and mental issues in this hard life situation. Considering my personal experience can drive this notion home, when I was hired in a company in the first days of my work, it was hard for me to obey my manager orders. So, I feel I must be rude with my boss and broke the respect boundaries with him. As a result, after a few months, I got fired and I have not able to find a job with the same income since then.
To sum up considering all the aforementioned reasons, I believe there is no need to be impolite with others at work. Politeness not only helps you to find close friends but also provide you with job security in future.
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- Inorder to attract more tourists what should government do Ornament the city hire more police officers 70
- There is no reason to be impolite rude to another person 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: todays'; today's
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... but also provide you with job security in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, i feel, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2625.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70430107527 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67524790432 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496415770609 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9705118803 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32142857143 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171585794463 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04659338286 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571727384937 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111101653353 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189339397872 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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