today people life is much easier than their grandparents lived as a child
Life condition always changes bypassing the time. Human lifestyles are completely different from their ancestors. A lot of improvements in any subjects has been achieved. Some people believe that life today is much easier and comfortable than when their grandparents lived as a child. In my own perspective, I am on the opinion that today life is much easier than before. Following sentences will elucidate my idea on this topic.
First, no one could deny the fact that these days technology has been developed and improved, the new equipment has been contrived and invented. For instance, means of transportation like cars, airplane, train or telecommunication systems, like phone, cell phone, and so on have been created. These inventions could ease life. people do not need spent much time and energy to displace from one place to another or write a mail and waited for more than a week to be aware of their friends' life who lived in other towns, they can simply make a call to connect to any person in any places they want. These kind of tasks were major concern those days. Definitely, a human can do their job easier and faster which results in time-saving they could provide more leisure time and create more enjoyable moment in their life.
Second, it is needless to say that, in past health and coping with illnesses were a great concern, people die from disease frequently. There were no organization to control foods and drinking water quality, which contribute more illness. Of springs die at first month of they lived due to lack of vaccinating to deal with new viruses and microbes. However, these days by enormous progress in science and the advent of new medicine, the disease would be cured faster, people lived longer and also the food they eat and water drink are safer. a recent research in Harvard university confirms that peoples' living hope increase significantly compared to the people lived sixty years ago.
To sum up, life today is much easier based on the emerging of new devices and developing technology, and also people may live longer and less suffer from disease and illness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
..., no one could deny the fact that these days technology has been developed and impro...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ated. These inventions could ease life. people do not need spent much time and energy ...
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Line 7, column 598, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... to any person in any places they want. These kind of tasks were major concern those days....
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...ood they eat and water drink are safer. a recent research in Harvard university c...
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Line 11, column 542, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...ood they eat and water drink are safer. a recent research in Harvard university confirms that peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94972067039 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5865318477 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594972067039 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9888878599 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419521834067 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120414701258 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177369412951 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270630638987 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15298366085 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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