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young people are celebrities followers in the world. Attracting young people in cermonies by celebrities is one of the heated controversial issue to almost all people struggling with this problem for long time. I strongly believe that the inspiration of celebrities is prevalent action for young people and vast majority of old people have not interesting to celebrities. In what follow,I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
first of all,The serious point to be mentioned is that the style of celebrities is alluring for young people and they follow celebrities. Although in some cases celebrities have immoral behavior,young people follow them.in this regards,we can easily realize this popularity of celebrities among people by searching in social media.let me explain this issue with a tangible example. For instance,in Inistagram whole the people have most followers are celebrities.
finally yet importantly, another significant reason why i agree with above statement is the indisputable fact the vast majority of celebrities are handsome and beautiful.that why, most of the young people love them. In the teenage age most of the people follow the popular people and specially celebrities with nice face and they want imitate their behavior and clothes style. In this regards,the famous clothes brands use of these celebrities in order to advertise their goods because they know this action attracts the people opinion specially young people due to their popularity and renown.
let me illustrate this topic with an instance. For example,your favorite actors or athletes use a t-shirt with a new brand certainly you convince buy that T-shirt because you want become similar to your favorite celebrities.
in nutshell,taking all these merits discussed into account we can find the efficacy of celebrities in society and due to prominence of them the young people are influenced by celebrities. I am deeply being of the this opinion that notion of the celebrities is more important for young people than old people and this subject is undeniably.
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finally, first, if, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00866128789 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518633540373 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2136296505 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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