In my opinion selection one manner between keeping friendships with old friends or finding new people to have friendship with depend on different factors such as our time and place situation, characteristics of those people who we want to keep or commence friendship with. We always should try to make or keeping friendships with people who are reliable and if they are old or new friends isn't an important issue. On the other hand different situation determine if we should keep our old friends or finding new persons.
First, sometimes we should keep our old friends instead of try to find new ones. For example a person that has some old friends that rely on them from different aspects making new friendships with strangers isn't necessary.
Second against what i expresses above in some situation making new friends is better and more usefulness rather than keeping only a few friends who we have had from past. For an instance when a student pass school and inter to university finding new friends is necessary because university is very different from schools and having good friends help students to improve their ability and learn more things.
Third, sometimes old friends are more helpful and sympathetic for us. For an example i have a friend named nargess who i have been friend with her from childhood.she lived in my neighborhood with her family before her marriage. She and my love each other very much and have a deep emotional bond that cause we support each other every time we are in need of help. Last year i had gone to a chemistry conference unfortunately i had an car accident so i didn't tell my mom because my mom had has heart attack before and i didn't want to intense her disease. On the other hand i found so many other friends except nargess but i couldn't rely on any of them finally i called her and applied for help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e a friend named nargess who i have been friend with her from childhood.she lived...
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...t i couldnt rely on any of them finally i called her and applied for help.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24633431085 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.16715542522 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.134897360704 0.0866891130778 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0410557184751 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0762463343109 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123167155425 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0410557184751 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55703136948 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234604105572 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0557184750733 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00879765395894 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0263929618768 0.0139019557991 190% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1854.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68711656442 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331288343558 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245398773006 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122699386503 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101226993865 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55703136948 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503067484663 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.5826959194 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1666666667 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2145567348 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.644075263715 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.7065439673 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.44329896907 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277866429539 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149237026449 0.103427244359 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100321478194 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579927188555 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150550969633 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121892304031 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065937513407 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2468843714 0.336927656856 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0526187986902 0.067059652881 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191746641064 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599717294991 0.0618886996521 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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