Humans beings are social creatures, they tend to form different kinds of relationship with each other. These kinds of connection help them to cope with many of the life's difficulties and make the life much easier. One of the strongest bonds that connect the people are friendships. some people argue that one should keep his old friends rather than forming new ones. Personally, I disagree with this statement for the following reasons.
To begin with, Making a new friend is something inevitable. The person will continue to meet new people everywhere; in the school, in the neighborhood, at work or even when he travels to a new part of the world. This thing will not stop until the person die. So, it is normal that people will continue to make new friends all the time. For sure that does not mean to ignore old friends or to replace them with the recent ones. Moreover, knowing new people, especially if they from a different country, give the opportunity to gain knowledge about that country regarding its culture and tradition as if you read a book about that place. For instance, one of my friends, are really social, he likes to make new friends wherever he goes, later on when he established his own company, his large connections contributed to the success of his work. In the beginning, he was struggling to find a fund to establish his work. But through communication with his friends, he was able to find a lot myriad of sponsors and that helped him a lot. Thus, we can say that if we enlarge the circle of people we know, our opportunity in the life will enhance too.
Furthermore, due to the circumstances of living. Most of the people leave their country and go to another one in order to seek better work opportunity. As a result, one can found himself in a new place, away from his old friends. Thus, he will be forced to make new friendships. Otherwise, he will be lonely and that will negatively affect his performance at work. For example, during the last year, I moved to work in Dubi, at the start I felt sad because I had to leave my friends. But after a while, I started to know new people there and I made a lot of valuable relationships. My new friends help me to cope with the new environment, and they have become as a family to me. So, I was able to enjoy my life there. However, I still communicate with my old friends due to the fact that the old friends who accompany us in the earlier stages of our lives are really invaluable.
To sum up, there is a continuous need to make relationships with new people due to the fact that they participate in making the life in a new place more adaptable. In spite of that, the old connection will always have its special part of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49898989899 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6336725303 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1573443069 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4814814815 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96296296296 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182681300971 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553930447337 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525835414484 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128511118084 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119067627697 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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