Although someone believes technological advancements make us uncomfortable because it produces technology addict and reduces opportunities for face to face communication, I do think that we are more comfortable than old days that my grandparents were children.There are two reasons. Worldwide interface and availability of access to information.
Firstly, We can communicate with someone in the long distance.
Several decades ago, it was hard and took long times to communicate.Also, it is impossible to interaction someone who lives at overseas in the home. However, nowadays we can quickly talk with people all over the world.To communicate with many people means you can find people who have the same hobby without difficulty.
I think that being able to meet new friends is a happy thing.
Secondly, availability of access to information.present-day you can see the data everywhere at any time. When I tripped abroad, I faced an unexpected accident that the delay of the train even though I made a solid plan. However, immediately I can deal with the problem because of the smartphone that enables me to see another route.If I hadn't had the smartphone, I would be stuck.
In conclusion, Life today is ease and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were young
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2572815534 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43903517807 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5229416564 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181450520048 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678832850089 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109936315391 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103623920133 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129110077656 0.0645574589148 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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