TPO8
The reading claims that Chevalier distorted or changed his memoir to make his life more exciting and provides three points. However, the professor explains that chevalier's memoir is accurate and reliabe and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading say that if chevalier was a rich person who spend a lot money on parties and gambling, does not borrow money from a swiss merchant. Conversly, the professor oppose this point saying that Chevalier was very wealthy and he has a lot of property and spend money on parties and gambling. One of reason he borrow money from swiss merchant was that he did not have money and the process of convert property to money take some time.
Second, based on the reading, chevalier wirtes his conversation with famous writer voltaire after many years and it is not feasible to remember exact phrases. Nevertheless, the speaker states that chevalier each night after his talk with famus writer Voltaire, write their conversation and other people confirm that he talk about his writed note with other people such as jurnalists.
Third, according to the reading, chevalier escape from prison by making a hole in ceiling is not true and he bribes jailers and they let him run away. In contrast, the lecturer contradict this point reasoning that there were many people in the jail that have more political power than Chevalier and they could not bribe jailer. Also, old documents from past show that day after Chevalier's escape from prison in venice, ceil of jail repair and this show that he run away from prison by making a hole in the ceiling.
Therefore, the specific points mentioned in the reading is not make sense.
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 73
- TPO 14 70
- TPO 14 71
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chevaliers'' or 'chevalier's'?
Suggestion: chevaliers'; chevalier's
...s. However, the professor explains that chevaliers memoir is accurate and reliabe and refu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'borrows'.
Suggestion: borrows
... parties and gambling. One of reason he borrow money from swiss merchant was that he d...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91134751773 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3723722289 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3236902147 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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