In my point of view people benefit of traveling to other countries instead of their own country for some reasons. If i want to say my reasons In summary i will say that by traveling in other countries many economy, cultural and spiritual beneficiary will be earn for people and countries.
First, by traveling all over the world people will be interested to the culture of those countries and this cause strength of peacefulness in the world. In the recent years some political method try to distribute enemy between different race and countries but people by traveling to other countries learn to love other people.
Second, by traveling to other countries people help to own mind and character development. People travel to another country especially those with completely different culture. For an example a person who live in England has learned to be a logical person who concentrate on logical matter instead of emotional and spiritual ones. This person when travel to Indian by facing to people who try to concentrate on spiritual matters and solve their problem by help of spirituality, learn to be more emotional and try to balance her personality.
Third, traveling to other country cause government develop and improve their relationship with other country and try to have economy, cultural and political relationship with other countries and this as i said in the first reasons help to the peacefulness developing . On the other hand by increasing traveling to foreign countries government will be enforced to developed cheap traveling facilities. In the most countries traveling to foreign region is so expensive and time consuming.
as a conclusion, traveling to other countries instead of their own countries, people will have beneficiary such as character and mind developing, personality characteristics balancing, learning people loving, promotion of peacefulness, economy advantages for other people and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31699346405 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00976493647 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454248366013 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8061299737 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.583333333 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240338096707 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121877067167 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451384259767 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158383007491 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263289366645 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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