There is debate on the topic that advertisement has makes the product seems much better then they really are.Some people are believing in some products by looking advertisement but some may not believe on them.I feel this statement is correct to some extent.Also we cannot say that all the advertisement are true and believable. In the following paragraph i will explore my opinion.
As we all know that nowadays we can see many advertisement of all most all products for example[rice,furniture,cosmetic products,shampoos etc].As i have heard that those products which are published for information on television and internet have not all the qualities which are mentioned at the time of advertisement.They provide lots of information and make attractive slogans to attract consumers.But most of the time we cannot find that qualities and ingredient which are mentioned at the time of advertisement .
Not only negative aspect there are some positive aspect of advertisement.Most of the time with the help of advertisement we are well known about something that is available in the market.Some products really have all the qualities mentioned.Advertisement makes us aware of something that is harmful and hazards for customers.Because of advertisement there is more selling of products which directly or indirectly helps to earn profit for the company and it will affect on country's economy as well.Advertisement helps in demanding more products which helps to increase trade inside and outside the country.So these are some of my views or opinion towards the advertisement of products in the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, really, so, then, well, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.424 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89429137449 2.67179642975 146% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.1344086022 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 238.666477537 48.9658058833 487% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.0 100.406767564 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.5 20.6045352989 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.45110844103 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201299396861 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118872119652 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666513995951 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146571141811 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577850437614 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 11.7677419355 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.37 58.1214874552 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 10.1575268817 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.0537634409 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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