A majority of the people believes that lectures play a major role in pupils life then peers . this essay first agrees that teachers play crucial role in one's life and then submit the adverse effect of bad friends in one's life
Most of the students will have a great impact of their teachers on them in any means , and secondly teachers are considered as second parent . their way of teaching , behaviour attracts pupils much . they feel like they can share their weak points with them plus a kind nature of teachers helps students to understand the importance of education in their life . times recently reported that students are more close to their lecturers then their parents in sharing their view , secrets, feeling etc.
moreover it is quiet beneifical for them as they can learn more things from their teacher than parents.
Generally friends and companions are together while partying , playing etc . During study hours if those who are interested to study can accompany you while othermay be least bother about it. However a good friend is goods gift and a bad company of friends would divert you from the track and certain time leads to serious problems . A recent survey conducted by uk university found that people who are influenced by teachers score more grades then them who often had a lot of party with their a friends
In conclusion teachers can shape one's personality and can enhance students future where as peers groups can also be supportive if they encourage you to educate rather then inviting you for party every time .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87786259542 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36932070027 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4766469778 48.9658058833 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.8 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.5376344086 686% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214625948843 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852164073653 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669648306075 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113528033779 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676593231038 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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