TPO 19_ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
news inform us the latest and truthworthy information regardless of time and place. To become a well-informed person, it is essenetial to read and watch news. however, news is not impartial. depend on what news or article released, it has different perspective and political view. I believe that various information from many different news resources rather negatively affect with the few following reasons.
news inform us the latest and truthworthy information regardless of time and place. To become a well-informed person, it is essenetial to read and watch news. however, news is not impartial. depend on what news or article released, it has different perspective and political view. I believe that various information from many different news resources rather negatively affect with the few following reasons. news inform us the latest and truthworthy information regardless of time and place. To become a well-informed person, it is essenetial to read and watch news. however, news is not impartial. depend on what news or article released, it has different perspective and political view. I believe that various information from many different news resources rather negatively affect with the few following reasons. news inform us the latest and truthworthy information regardless of time and place. To become a well-informed person, it is essenetial to read and watch news. however, news is not impartial. depend on what news or article released, it has different perspective and political view. I believe that various information from many different news resources rather negatively affect with the few following reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08533213389 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 212.727598566 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.202380952381 0.524837075471 39% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4670313618 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05 5.45110844103 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256808398136 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125739238874 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555222412291 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256808398136 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.1575268817 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.73 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.42 8.01818996416 68% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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