TPO 2 (independent)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of making products much better in advertisement than they really are. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree that most advertisement make products seem much better than they really are. it is my firmly belief that most companies trick people like this by
showing
these fake advertisements for number of reasons, I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, most advertisements are fake to trick people just by their one time profit cheap product, so that they sold as many as they can. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. you see, one time I was watching this adverisement for slim sauna belt for reducing belly fat, so on that on ad the belt look so good, authentic, and high quality material but after purchasing that belt; I was really disappointed in it because they trick me into buy a cheap belt and it was not the same product. As a result, it turned out to be a disappointment for me because most of the time these ads
show
their product to be seem better or totally different from they really are. For this reason, I believe most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Secondly, these advertisements don't
show
the whole truth of the product and hide things like quality and other stuffs. For instance,
these advertisements company don't
show
you the things you want see or check in a product; they make their product gloomy and make it much better for the sake advertisement. Moreover, these advertisements are the worst because they trick and fool people to buy their product by
showing
some unrealistic things. it's certainly clear to why these advertisements are not worth to judge the product and you need to see the product in real life by your eyes.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that most of the advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
- TPO 2 independent Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83760683761 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373618375 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475783475783 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9976103229 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.615384615 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315513582135 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153768052764 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106668131455 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150507355118 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111640044555 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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