Most people want to be very successful in their life. Only some people tend to be successful and content with their life. Most people don't want to take risks because they are afraid. Some take risks, in that some people succeed some don't. But people have a higher chance of succeeding if they are willing to take risks and try something new.Generally, successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know well, particularly when they are in a very competitive atmosphere.
First of all, they like being innovative. The world is a very competitive place, people cannot succeed if they are going to be improving the things that already exist. By a way of example, "Nokia" has been the top dog in the mobile phones industry for many decades until "Apple" came. After that "Apple" has taken it's place and eventually "Nokia" had to sell the company to Microsoft. "Nokia was in the top place because it used to be innovative, "Apple" revolutionized the mobile phones, but "Nokia" just went on improving on their older models. People at "Nokia" were not innovative enough, so they suffered the ultimate fate.
In addition to being innovative, they try to make the world a better place by taking on very difficult tasks only fathomed by them.Successful people when they see a thing that is not good enough, they try to create something better. For example, ""Elon musk" wanted to reduce the pollution due to I.C engines, so he started a electric vehicle company that started a revolution in the automobile industry. When he took on the problem of exorbitant costs of space exploration, he started doing reusable rockets that are way cheaper to use.
Successful people tend to think very different from normal people. They study about things deeper and understand them, and they will try to solve them. They don't complain about things like normal people does, they act.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, i am of the opinion that in most cases successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know well.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216035634744 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.178173719376 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0913140311804 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0556792873051 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0556792873051 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.097995545657 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0378619153675 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1066940655 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356347438753 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0645879732739 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00445434298441 0.0209618222197 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0200445434298 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2188.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 358.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11173184358 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329608938547 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22625698324 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156424581006 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122905027933 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1066940655 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.5862223065 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8888888889 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4949107438 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.555555556 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.5145872129 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.21538461538 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30140456216 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186173499434 0.103427244359 180% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.154601199355 0.0752933317313 205% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.585026619829 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182104945923 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127110651907 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891087335285 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224469124615 0.336927656856 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109530624627 0.067059652881 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221667929882 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867036316079 0.0618886996521 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.