Nowadays, the strength of every nation is mainly dependent on the youth that are living in the country.Some people says that, they are more responsible towards the society and give their time for helping their community but other views are different. In my opinion young people don't give their time for helping their community, for several reasons.
Firstly, in this competitive world young people don't have much time for their community. Now, everyone participates in money race, everyone wants to earn more money for lavish lifestyle. Young people have more energy but they don't have enough time as they are busy with their education, job and other family issues. As 'time is money' and no one wants waste of time. For example, my colleague in my office does two jobs, one full time job and one part time job, just to earn more money. Whenever there is any community event happened, he don't bother at all. He always having an excuse that he don't get enough time to attend such event.
In this present era people attitude changes a lot. Many families nowadays are nuclear. Now people are living more in metro cities and they are having less affinity towards each other. People become more eccentric and they don't bother for their society issues or any matter. Young people are become careless and they just think for their own. They enjoy their life in pub,watching movies,and playing games.
Lastly, as increasing in corruption causes young people to less believe on community issue seriously. Young generation have more energy and they are more get affected with community matter.However when things like corruption in NGO happened they get disturbed easily, and hence after that they are careless towards any society issue.
In conclusion, young people are building pillar of every nation but due to less in time , changing people attitudes and corruption in system leads them to spend less time in helping their community.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270194986072 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.16713091922 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105849582173 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445682451253 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.075208913649 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111420612813 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0389972144847 0.0351676179071 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36014864827 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016713091922 0.0309702414327 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0445682451253 0.0887237588012 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.008356545961 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1936.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 323.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99380804954 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343653250774 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210526315789 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151702786378 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0959752321981 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36014864827 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501547987616 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.2092376833 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9444444444 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4594996512 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.54480286738 289% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.9970760234 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.46601941748 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201337246917 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129121296306 0.103427244359 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108383057292 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522573151991 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205015244014 0.151897553556 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814431839477 0.114077575197 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045687289756 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290796489275 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.034626731861 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137363437085 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377323180912 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.