In today's world, survival of human being is not as same as before. Life becomes so fast and complex. I agree with the statement that it is essential for young people to have an ability to plan and organise in order to deal with the complex life.
Firstly. time management is the crucial factor in dealing with the complex life. In this competitive world it is important that every person should update one's knowledge time to time.In order to match with this fast running life young generation should have a tendency to match and skills to overcome the obstacles in life. For instance, one friend of mine pursuing his college degree at the same time when he was working. He manages both sides efficiently just because of proper planning.
Secondly. physically and mentally young people should sound good to face different challenges. In the past, people have stress free life than the present. Nowadays it is essential to have a good mental balance in every aspect of life. Previously, professional life has less importance than the personal life but, due to increasing educational, career opportunities makes professional life equal important.
Lastly,a good planning always leads to a successful life. Person's success in his life only when he does early planning at young age, so that he gets benefit late in his life.
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Suggestion: Physically
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223577235772 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.142276422764 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.154471544715 0.0866891130778 178% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0569105691057 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0447154471545 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117886178862 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0284552845528 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59936451562 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0447154471545 0.0309702414327 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0772357723577 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121951219512 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00813008130081 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1327.0 2387.08602151 56% => OK
No of words: 222.0 408.028673835 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97747747748 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.48200974243 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342342342342 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252252252252 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18018018018 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112612612613 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59936451562 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 57.9959466115 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6812272736 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 120.699889404 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 40.0252252252 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.51666666667 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393441182724 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0712293184505 0.103427244359 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0663985124303 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452459872008 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224601943895 0.151897553556 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138198164152 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137956091098 0.0781384742642 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322942414846 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0743853209509 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271403060024 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13280653702 0.0618886996521 215% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.