Nowadays, university professors are considered one of the most important aspects in the educational field. They are playing an important role in the whole society. Recently, I am sure that many people prefer the universities to increase the professor's salaries. While others might disagree. However, when it comes to me I actually agree that it is very necessary to provide the universities professors with high salary for two important reasons which, I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, high salaries will motivate the professors. Professors play a critical role in the student's lives. The professors can help students to do their best to graduate with very high scores which will help the whole society. For example, the universities here in my whom town appreciate the professor efforts. In addition, all the universities give huge amount of money to the professor. So, the professors are so motivated and energized to do their best for students. For instance, the professors in my college use tremendous ways of technology to improve the student's skills like computer skills, and communications skills. They try to get the students so excited by using the computers during the classrooms and make a conference meeting with other students all over the world. As a result, students became so talented and well prepared for the future. In addition, this will improve the whole society. This experience taught me that when the professors take good salaries they will be creative and do great effort. Consequently, they will be so professionals and the education level will be in efficient manner.
In addition, good salary will encourage professors to spend more time with students. Students spend long time in camps and lectures before their graduation and starting their careers. Besides, they need their professor help to be well prepared for their practical lives. For instance, my brother graduated from the medical school from Italy. He told me that the professors over there paid so well. So, the professors are willing to spend as much as they can with students to get them ready for their future. This is because the university appreciates their efforts. In additions, he states that when he was working on his graduation assignment, his professor spend with him like one moth helping him to get the materials for the graduation project. Furthermore, he gave him helpful advice about how he can select the topic for that project. As a result, he graduated with very high score. As you can see, when university give a good salary for professors, they can invest their time with students. Consequently, students will get ready for their future with high skills.
In sum, I believe that universities should spend money on salaries for all university professors. This is because this will motivate the professors, and this will help professors to spend extra time with their students
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, consequently, furthermore, however, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14075630252 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79897142704 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43487394958 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9853090076 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.935483871 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3548387097 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45161290323 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155551856307 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532811681234 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618952062382 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13266082179 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459730358277 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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