In my personal point of view I believe that it is very useful and important for all young people to have a plan and they have to be organized nowadays In this modern life to be easy for them to reach their goals and to save time.
First of all to reach your goal by so easy way you have to be organized and have very specific plan what I mean is every on in this modern life have a lot of issues , events, goals and activities have to be done on daily baseies so it is very important to every on to select the priorites and the do his best to catch his goal so everyone has to have a plan and has to organize his ideas and his activities for example I remember when I was I high school I decided to put a plan to get very high score to join facuilty of pharmacy so I put schedule to finish all my study on time and organized all my daily activities according to my time besides I put my study as the first issue , as a result I would able to join pharmacy school too easy. Besides as New York times they states that people who had a plan and organize their life they could catch their goal 80% more than people who does not have any plan .
In addition if you have a good plan you would be able to save time , what I mean is a lot of people have concern about they does not have time to do all their daily activity eventhough they have a lot of hours daily but the problem is they does not have a great plan how to manage their time . if their organize their time according to each daily activities they would be able to do whatever they want .In my case after I got marriage I used to have a plan for every day so I do the most important activities in the morning and I try to do everything on time so buy the end of the day I have like one hour extra to play with my daughter and help her to do her homework . besides I read an article last week about people who have a good plan and who are organized and the articles states that they could save time to do another stuff every day by 20% more than people who does not have a plan .
In conclusion when considering save time and reach your goal too easy. I strongly Believe that people have to be organized and it is very important to have a good plan in this modern life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'i mean', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207343412527 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.198704103672 0.158761421928 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777537796976 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388768898488 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.11879049676 0.0685040099705 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103671706263 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0194384449244 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.09668849545 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0669546436285 0.0309702414327 216% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0842332613391 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107991360691 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237580993521 0.0139019557991 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2231.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 456.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89254385965 5.86048508987 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.164473684211 0.338922669872 49% => More words length more than 5 chars wanted.
words length more than 6 chars: 0.120614035088 0.251872472559 48% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0899122807018 0.174417080927 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0460526315789 0.112833075102 41% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.09668849545 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353070175439 0.524397521467 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.9866638299 59.2087087015 66% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6684587814 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.5533526081 277% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 197.603730671 48.84282405 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.875 120.699889404 231% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.5533526081 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.644075263715 233% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.54480286738 433% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 69.0614035088 45.7405998639 151% => OK
Elegance: 0.927272727273 1.45489161554 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384788037389 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.217709730118 0.103427244359 210% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143412069019 0.0752933317313 190% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71146908074 0.497263757937 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207542922965 0.151897553556 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219528518103 0.114077575197 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103256065265 0.0781384742642 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.512956164575 0.336927656856 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111632972171 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302945138324 0.210909579961 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028886789662 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.