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TPO-3 - Independent Writing Task

Today intimate relationship plays a paramount role in the people lifestyle. as the on of these relationship is communication between you and your friends. through this matter I am of the opinion that making new friends is really more important than continue with old friends. I feel this way for two major reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, getiing relationship with new people causes you can find a situation to try new things and experiences. to illustrate the idea let's consider the following example from my own life. I had just one old friend that became fammilar to each other since we were child. In our place which I lived, we played and worked with each other and I had no sense to the traits of other people and had a rutine life and did repititious activities. when I become older I immigrated to other place and find new people and could get relationship with them. Afterwards, I learn many new works like bussiness and learn new lessons like how to speak eloquently in a scene from them that no time cannot recieve from my old friend.
Furthermore, by making new friend, despite of learning new things you are able to modify your characteristic in true way. As another example of my own life, it can indicate to my relation to a new person in Iran capital, Tehran. He was a psychologist at a university with high-desipline in his teaching and work. He alwasy had a good relationship with his students and understood their problems profoundly and provide usefule solutions for them. When I fammilar with him, his characteristic influence on me and caused that I became interested in his field and change my educational path. consequently I am a psychologist instead of a mechanical engineer.

To put it in a nutshell, I mentioned two main resoans which were about leaning new things and characteristic effect, from my own life to provide benefit of making new friend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...paramount role in the people lifestyle. as the on of these relationship is communi...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this relationship' or 'these relationships'?
Suggestion: this relationship; these relationships
...e in the people lifestyle. as the on of these relationship is communication between you and your f...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Through
...unication between you and your friends. through this matter I am of the opinion that ma...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...tion to try new things and experiences. to illustrate the idea lets consider the f...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ne life and did repititious activities. when I become older I immigrated to other pl...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Consequently
...s field and change my educational path. consequently I am a psychologist instead of a mechan...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: consequently,
...s field and change my educational path. consequently I am a psychologist instead of a mechan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, so, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75975975976 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91560199088 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5099153296 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2352941176 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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