TPO-37-2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
without shadow of doubt all the people want to do their work well and be successful in their life. one group of people assert that people do very few thing well because they involve with different things. According to my experience and actual observation of people live have led me to be agree with dis topic. I have many reason to prove my point.
The first and foremost consequential reason is that, nowadays technology development make everything as faster as possible and people must adopt with this changes and because of that they always do different thing in their life. some of them promote their education beside their work some others marry beside the work and education and there are cause to they can’t do each of them successfully. they gain low mark in their education and always be late in the work place and spend little time with their parents. they must first of all finished their education as short as possible and then seeking for good job that can provide their future demand after all they must create good family with some they love.
Another point that springing in my mind is that, most of the people search the part-time job beside their principal job because their job’s income can’t support their demand and that cause to decrease their performance in work place. they always work hard in to time without any rest and that cause to decrease their activity and success in their job. if they want to have high income they must focus in single work and work hard to increase their performance and took their dean attention and that cause to dean decide to promote their position and the good position have a lot of opportunity like good income.
To sum it all by taking all the detail into consideration, if people want to have good income and success in their life they must focus in one thing and try to do their thing’s successfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, after all, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37007669592 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448484848485 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1933195689 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172285812347 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983464494609 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993964151674 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143150869873 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964176575188 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.