TPO 39 - Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Finding a proper job is a critical juncture in the life of each person. Jobs are related to the abilities, cultures, economic condition to name but a few, and a person should consider them. A controversial discuss begins at the point that jobs in the past led an individual to become a success and found his potential or not. In this regard, a few people would consider that people today can find a secure job which helps to thrive and proper, but others claim otherwise. I am among the people believing that some features had existed in the past aided people to be a success in that not only were jobs easy to do, but the competition for finding a job also was less dramatic.
The first aspect for my propensity towards this issue is that jobs were less complicated in the past. In other words, one would become a master of a job after apprenticing his craftsperson. He needed less time to learn and got experienced to run his business. On the other hand, hiring in a company, one will need to get an academic degree, lots of ability, and well-experienced. Hence, he should be well-prepared to find a job or run a business otherwise he will be failed or bankrupted.
In addition to the previous point, indeed it is true to say that lots of people compete for a job. The fact of the matter is that ocean of students after graduation, seeking for a career. In this regard, to outperform other, they have to get a high score as well as being knowledgeable and well-experienced. Equally important, due to the economic recession, the employee should keep up their skills and abilities because sometime a company will fire some of its employees. As a result, they should improve their skills and learn new techniques which assists them to keep their jobs. In addition, lots of immigrants have been severed the competition seeking for a career. One should always keep himself up in order to pave the way to achieving the apex of success.
By taking into account all the aforementioned reasons. one might come to the conclusion that one would be more make sure his job could help him to have a fostering future because of both easy jobs to learn and master and less competition space between workers. It is highly recommended that people find a job which guarantees their success.
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... way to achieving the apex of success. By taking into account all the aforement...
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...account all the aforementioned reasons. one might come to the conclusion that one w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64108910891 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77589381319 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519801980198 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0642920816 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101700963636 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325482811043 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291809137901 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662384662034 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305504360364 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.