Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the government managers try to have a precise plan for organizing job positions and education, in this shape that this two factors covered each other. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that in the past it was easier for young people to found out what type of career would lead to a secure, successful future. I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that makes the decision about the future job was easier and more secure in the past than it is now.
First and foremost, in the past, the government managing for careers had not any mean. Most of the young person continue their father's jobs and the careers at this time were very simple and primary. But today and after the technology revolution, appeared a lot of new jobs and services in the society. In addition, the number of academic educated people increased significantly. This new condition needed a powerful planning for organizing the number of educated people that need for each part of manufactures or special services. Thus, the social scientist started to research and provide a lot of valuable ways and methods for correct managing jobs.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that today's the education system move toward that provide the very helpful condition for students in the schools to help them for identifying their own interest vacation. For example, they try to get information about different jobs to the primary student or providing a chance of internship for high school students so they can involve directly to each type of job that they think it's their interest. also, I know that there are several programs in the schools for finding special abilities in each student based on their personal intelligent.
Finally, yet importantly, today young people have more freedom to make a decision about their own job and their life. But in the past parents take decision instead of their children. This condition led to a lot of people include in the jobs that they did not like it or have not suitable ability of them.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that today young people have more chance to identify a job that leads to a secure, successful future. because of government jobs management and improvement of the education system and also more freedom for the young person to make the decision about themselves.
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 70
- one of the best ways that parents can help their children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 85
- Do you agree or not?Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well. 70
- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...new jobs and sevices in the society. In addition the number of academic educated people ...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
...ip for high school students to they can involved directly to each type of job that they ...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...tly to each type of job that they think its their interest. also, I know that threr...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...job that they think its their interest. also, I know that threre is several progams ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ased on their personal intelligents. Finally yet importantly, today young people hav...
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Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...at lead to a secure, successful future. because of goverment jobs managments and improv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91625615764 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55184776314 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524630541872 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.775525657 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.411764706 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131966192232 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483900945284 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591899198538 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863704087603 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06328222858 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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