There is no deny in the fact that teachers play a crucial role in the future of each society. Although many people hold the opinion that teachers were more appreciated and valued in the past, I believe that are still loved and their impact is still known by both the government and individuals due to 3 main reasons.
To start with, it is completely clear that parents are not capable of educating their children to be a social, ethical person and also to figure out an efficient way to teach them science, literature and history. Specially with development of society most parent are acquired to work longer hours and are not able to spend as much time with their children. So, school and more importantly teachers are huge part in each person's level of education in different subjects. However, teachers have to take care of all of these matters, aside from providing effective ways to present them.
Secondly, everyone has nice and remarkable memories of their teachers. How they always had their back. How they tried to unsee some of their actions and many other possible choices. A lot of us have been looking up to them or even have changed our paths being inspired by something they did or said. This can be an evidence that there are still some bonds connecting us to them so we can recall how valuable they are to us.
Last but not least, no matter if they are too friendly and kind or too strict, everybody is aware that each manner presented by teachers holds some logical reason behind it. Sometimes they are too hard on us to acknowledge how much we can tolerate the burden on our shoulders and grow. And sometimes too they become nice so we realize the existence of a shoulder to cry on. The more we grow up the worth of those manners makes more sense to us and let us now how much effort they have put in raising us in the right way.
To sum up, teachers have always been precious and a key role in improvement of each country. Also, people still know their worth and look up to them due to all the things they have done. There is no denial in their value and will never be.
- TPO 35 Integrated Writing Task 90
- TPO 46 Integrated Writing Task In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which form 90
- TPO 46 Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examp 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducation in different subjects. However, teachers have to take care of all of the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...A lot of us have been looking up to them or even have changed our paths being ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47395833333 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3038913997 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7430906785 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11826271493 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384884347087 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026599101721 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704150557379 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028279981911 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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