There are different standpoints regarding the happiness from the work.Some argue that workers would gain more satisfaction from doing different typesof tasks while others held the opposite idea that to do the same task leadsthem to be happier. In fact, it is hard to judge and up to the context of the work.
Obviously, the majority of people arereluctant to repeat their action mechanically, because they cannot endure thetediousness created by the same work. Trying to do different types of tasks isbeneficial for them to keep the motivation of job and is easy to satisfythemselves with achieving success in varied domains.
Meanwhile, however, otherconsequences as a result from dissimilar sorts of work are supposed to be takeninto account as well.
The different types of tasks wouldmake it impossible for workers to be happy sometimes: they coerce these peopleto face new challenges and it costs more time to acquaint every kind of taskswhich even would be changed definitely in the second day. Except few extremelybold people, a huge number of workers will feel quite stressful when somethingis completely new for them.
Further, the same type of task doesn’t meansthe context of the job is the same. People are likely to suffer from variedkinds of formidableness in the daily work. An architect should do severaldifferent plans for one project. Even though they draw a window for onebuilding’s façade, they have to establish dozens of models of windows to matchthe whole genre. Besides, if their work does not fulfill their customers’demands, the architects have no choice but to redraw the façade. This type ofwork on some stage can also be called working repeatedly, whereas the contextis definitely different and filled with challenges. It affords the stronghappiness when the clients acclaim the work at last. So, I believe that no onewill affirm that being an architect is a boring position even though they onlydo design every day.
Consequently, we have to clarifywhich reasons lead workers to be happy. How different the type of tasks isunlikely to simply determine how happy workers can be during their workday. Ifone type of task containing diverse challenges stimulates someone’s motivation,the people would attain likewise pleasure from the work.
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
- TPO-44 - Independent Writing Task Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing th 73
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
- TPO-43 - Integrated Writing Task Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago. Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world. From the fossil remains, we know that agnostids were primitiv 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, while, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26908451715 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.037261104 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258021986808 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740817366197 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592654942599 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132979639212 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630950778024 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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