Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that all of people should try to have information about important events that occured around the world. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that most of the people are really busy with thier personal works and it is unnecessary and incredible that they create more sterss and concern for themselves by some events that cannot affected their daily life. I, to a great extent agree with this idea that it is important to know about events happening around the world.
First and foremost, it is impossible that important happens in another country do not affected our life. For example, a natural erouption in the one country can have significant impact on the price of oil. At the frist view, this two things could not have any association togeter but through a exact view, we see that this country is a very important oil trader in the world and because of this desoster affected all portion of this country selling the oil decrease by this counjtry and it led to an increase on the oil cost.
On another significant fact that should be taken into the consideration is that all of us should be responsible about unfortunate happens and problems that occured for another people in the world. For example, two years age an very strong eathrquate happen in the Nepal and led to killing a lot of people. The goverment of this country is not very powrful to can support all of needs for treat and restablish of desorts. Therefore, the poeple in this country were need help from other countries. And I remember that a lot of people in my country aculecting foods and maoney for sending to the Nepal.
Finally yet importantly, through know about events from another countries we can obtain information about their culture and their lifestyle. Brcause, today's the news networks suppoted all of cultural and social progarams and ceremonies in the world. Thus, we can reciveing valuable information from them.
On the basis of rerasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that we should be try to uptodated themselves from events happens in the world because of our etic ressponsibility and infoluence of this happence on our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ave any association togeter but through a exact view, we see that this country is...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n the world. For example, two years age an very strong eathrquate happen in the Ne...
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
.... Therefore, the poeple in this country were need help from other countries. And I r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...and maoney for sending to the Nepal. Finally yet importantly, through know about eve...
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Message: Did you mean 'tried'?
Suggestion: tried
...above, I am convinced that we should be try to uptodated themselves from events hap...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... because of our etic ressponsibility and infoluence of this happence on our life....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60384430168 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489304812834 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1335460343 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.733333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182418318523 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722225351855 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875055020644 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110753489821 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874343086251 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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