In this contemporary life, It is indisputable that technology plays a pivotal role in our privet and social life, thanks to advance of technology our life becomes more complicated. Therefore, Organization and planning have become one prominent aspect of everyone's' life which are significant requirements for overcoming obstacles in modern life. One question which arises here is that whether young people have to get the ability to plan and organize their task these days? I absolutely agree with that statement and I think the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I would explore some of the issues which are more conspicuous for me in following paragraphs.
The first important point to be mentioned is that planning and organization help people to better deal with the future emergency and also helps people to how to prevail over future difficulties. For example, when I was a child my father taught me how to organize and manage my money in order to being embroiled into financial difficulties due to inappropriate management in the future. Therefore, if I hadn’t had the ability to organize my many at a young age I wouldn’t have bought my house last years.
The second significant point which taken into consideration is that, making a plan for everything will save our time which we spend in making decisions. This question reminds me that when about a week ago, my friends and I had a date, we hadn't made any plans for it. After we met and took a rest, we just started to make decisions spontaneously. After a long time, however, we had a plan for our date. Well, if we made plans in advance, we would have more time to have fun instead of spending more time in making decisions.
To make a long story short, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, it is imperative that young people should train to power their organization and planning skill. Because lack in these abilities fades opportunities for development and happiness and will ruin their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... issue is overwhelming, I would explore some of the issues which are more conspicuous for m...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...ek ago, my friends and I had a date, we hadnt made any plans for it. After we met and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96726190476 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99400472136 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2395439761 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189030086364 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685316395567 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383170247711 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11412766326 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050380843487 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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