Recently, disputed matter is regularly brought to mind. Logically, people who grew up from diverse environments maintain various understanding towards the issue. In my opinion, I am in agreement with the above statement that ability to plan and organize is important for young people. Subsequent to expounding my viewpoint, I am convinced that it is vita; to consider the two lines of reasoning.
The first reason for opinion that can be seen by every person is that we all know that time-efficient makes a difference. There’s an old saying “Time is gold.” This proverb emphasizes the value of time and this cannot be second in modern society. We are living a busy and hectic life, so saving time means we can do a lot more things later. Many people say that life is not fair, but everyone has 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Thus, Young people need to have the ability to plan and organize.
Another equally important reason is, that taking our time is good at relieving our stress. Young people will accumulate stress as much as they are eager to experience as many things as possible while they are young and healthy. So they are under great stress, but a lot of them do not even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems. This is more serious than we think, so it is can be a way to relieve stress.
The third and most noteworthy reason is that the ability is cost effective. They can save a lot of money by organize schedules. If young people is a student and they are under a tight budget. They need to be thrift and economical.so waste money is crucial problem for them.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that planning can help people to save a lot of time, especially in this modern life with a plenty of complications. In other words, if a person doesn't have any plan for their life or even daily activities, he must waste a lot of time to make a good decision for each complicated tasks. Therefore, because people may counter with diverse type of difficulties in this complex world, good ability to plan is necessary for each young people. Let me shed a light on my point. According to the survey that was conducted in the Tehran University, people who have a definite plan to deal with intricate problems can find much time for fun and pleasure in comparison with people who didn't have any plan.
Looking at all the statements above, there are many reasons to be considered, but at the end of the day, younger people would rather have ability to have plan and organize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: After
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aste money is crucial problem for them. Looking at all the statements above, the...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...eople would rather have ability to have plan and organize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, third, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61127596439 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58425458087 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1221345286 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7894736842 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176330686028 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584658561841 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754105534608 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106823154108 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446449465657 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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