Recently, disputed matter is regularly brought to mind. Logically, people who grew up from diverse environments maintain various understanding towards the issue. In my opinion, I am in agreement with the above statement that ability to plan and organize is important for young people. Subsequent to expounding my viewpoint, I am convinced that it is vita; to consider the two lines of reasoning.
The first reason for opinion that can be seen by every person is that we all know that time-efficient makes a difference. There’s an old saying “Time is gold.” This proverb emphasizes the value of time and this cannot be second in modern society. We are living a busy and hectic life, so saving time means we can do a lot more things later. Many people say that life is not fair, but everyone has 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Thus, Young people need to have the ability to plan and organize.
Another equally important reason is, that taking our time is good at relieving our stress. Young people will accumulate stress as much as they are eager to experience as many things as possible while they are young and healthy. So they are under great stress, but a lot of them do not even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems. This is more serious than we think, so it is can be a way to relieve stress.
Looking at all the statements above, there are many reasons to be considered, but at the end of the day, younger people would rather have ability to have plan and organize.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: SUBSEQUENT_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: After
...rganize is important for young people. Subsequent to expounding my viewpoint, I am convinced...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...eople would rather have ability to have plan and organize.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58625321699 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.691450322 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17808330749 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637564836373 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826256933071 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116640525406 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448281180881 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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