TPO-48 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

This day and age, life has became very complex due to the development of information technology and globalization. Personally speaking, I believe that it is very crucial for young people to have the ability to plan and organize both their daily stuff and future career. The specific reasons will be elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, modern life is filled with a considerable amount of information which can be accessed through internet and social media. Thus, an individual who can utilize abundant resources will have a better chance to success. For instance, there are lots of online job recruitment which posted by big companies. They are looking for intelligent and experienced people who are qualified to those positons.Therefor, a man has to have knowledge about how to gather and collect information that suits his specialty. He must acknowledge how to do interview, and able to find other interviee's useful experience online.
Furthermore, acquiring ability to plan and organize also servers as a foundation of future career developement. Nowadays, lots of international company require their member to have this ability.
Apparently, planning ability allow them to have a broad horizon and global awareness. Being globally aware tends to make for well-rounded individuals who are very open-minded. If a man were to be put in a position where he had to make a decision regarding someone from another culture, being globally aware will help him make a good and well-informed decision. For example, Amazon hire cloud engineers who can speak multiple languages and are willing to serve for all kinds of different countries' customers and know a country's culture in order to avoid some unnecessary conflicts.
Last but not least, having planing ability can build young people's selfe-steem and self- confidence, because those ability help organize their daily stuffs. They gradually learn about the concept of time management which is essential to man's personal life. With help of the well organized plan of life, he will be much more efficient and have a strong physical conditions.
In conclusion, it is judicious to say that it is very important for young people to have the ability to plan and organize in this ever-changing society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
This day and age, life has became very complex due to the development of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. To begin with, modern life is filled wit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...success. For instance, there are lots of online job recruitment which posted by b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefor
...ple who are qualified to those positons.Therefor, a man has to have knowledge about how ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r interviees useful experience online. Furthermore, acquiring ability to plan a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to avoid some unnecessary conflicts. Last but not least, having planing abili...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ability' or 'those abilities'?
Suggestion: this ability; those abilities
...lfe-steem and self- confidence, because those ability help organize their daily stuffs. They ...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...re efficient and have a strong physical conditions. In conclusion, it is judicious to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23966942149 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99064964642 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597796143251 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.79797503 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250430900867 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775788722538 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062821956463 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144371190498 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608145103394 0.0645574589148 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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