Recently, general awareness about whether what is improtant to ability about friendship has aroused heated arguments.
People, nevertheless, have conflicting ideas; While some people say that to maintain friendship with a small group of people over long period time is important for happiness than to make many new friends, others deem otherwise. From my own point of view, I am in agreement with the former stand.
The first reason for my opinion that can be seen by every people is that we can relieve our stress by meeting old friend of mine, not new friends. Making new friends would be great experience for someone. However, people nowadays are living a busy and hectic life, so they are under great stress, but a lot of them don’t even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems. This is more serious than we think, so if it can ever be way to relieve stress, to maintain friendship and to meet more comfortable friend is important for us.
Another equally important reason is, that saving time. There’s an old saying, “Time is gold.” This proverb emphasize the value of time, and this cannot be more important true in modern society.
We are living busy and hectic life, so saving time means we can do a lot more things later. Many people say that life is not fair, but everyone has 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. So we have no time to meet new friends. To meet friends with together over a long period time is more important.
The third and most noteworthy reason is that Spending time with best friend is priority in any occasion.These days, we tend to to overlook the importance of old friend because they are too comfortable to take care of. if we spend lot a time with making new friend and neglect our originally friend, we lost our something important and regret it. and it is already late.
Looking at all the statements above, there are many reasons to be considered, but at the end of the day, I would rather maintain friends with small number of people over long time!
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 70
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...best friend is priority in any occasion.These days, we tend to to overlook the import...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ity in any occasion.These days, we tend to to overlook the importance of old friend b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6835106383 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49154154196 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523936170213 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7814368499 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354055274239 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110631794637 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953696098952 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172484218743 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884937759133 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.