TPO 52 The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
While some people are inclined towards that societies regulate youngsters to follow the rules is too strict. Others, on the other hand, disagree with this statement. As far as I concerned, my own opinion is that it is necessary for youngsters to obey the rules. In the following essay, I will delve into reasons and examples to support my viewpoint.
The first noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that obeying the rules set by the societies can reduce the probability of making mistakes. There are many criminal events happen around us, which means these people do not follow the regulations. As a result, they do something breaks the peace of society. For example, one of my friends, who is reluctant to follow the rules set by his parents. When he grows up, he put himself into a trouble and have to go to prison for a decade because he robs the bank.
Moreover, following the strict rules provides the youngsters a chance to learn be independence. Many youngsters do the house chores when they are little. The parents can regulate them to do the house chores. Therefore, when they grow up, they have capability of doing the house chores by themselves. Take my own experience as an example. When I was an university student, I had to live far away from my home by myself. The food is expensive over there. Luckily, I learnt how to cook on my own so I did not have to worry about my meal.
Last but not least, it is crucial to youngsters are able to organize the teamwork, and following this strict rules allow them to learn how to be a good team member. For instance, when I was a senior high school student, I had to do a project with my classmate to win the competition. Our team members wanted to set the rules to achieve the goal. Subsequently, my teammates set various regulations for our team. Consequently, following these strict rules helped us to have a well-performance and took second place in this competition.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I agree that youngsters have to follow these strict rules since that can decline the chance of making mistakes, learn not rely on anyone and be a good team member.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While some people are inclined towards that s...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to be'
Suggestion: to be
...ovides the youngsters a chance to learn be independence. Many youngsters do the ho...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...wn experience as an example. When I was an university student, I had to live far a...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to rely'
Suggestion: to rely
...he chance of making mistakes, learn not rely on anyone and be a good team member.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72004118694 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1261957884 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3043478261 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185963876246 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056535772431 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795330319662 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122409990572 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569169248948 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.