No one can deny the fact that both Internet access and public transportation have enormous impacts in a society. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose investing on internet access. Is my firm believe that spending government funds on this phenomena is more important for a number of reasons. I will develop and discuss these Ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, If more people had access to world wide net different companies could have replaced their business with online ones. For instance, bank transactions or shopping could have been done from home which can save huge amount of money and time.
Secondly, Internet has influenced and helped a lot of students and employees during their assignments.
In the past in order to gain information on a specific matter you had to go to the library and spend large amount of time reading and taking notes while now you can just search the key world and click enter.It is very clear to see why people prefer to study at home rather than in libraries.
Last but not least, generalizing internet between societies can lead to wide range of new job opportunities. This can bring income for those who need to work at home or are on a job hunt. This can have so many advantages for the government both in direct and indirect ways. For this reason, providing online chances of employment can have benefits both for workers and government.
To conclude, although public transportation is essential in each city, I believe that working on web access and improving it can be a more beneficial option for government.
- TPO 36 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time Use specific reasons and examples to 3
- TPO 49 Integrated writing 70
- TPO 39 integrated writing 80
- TPO 39 Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 45 Integrated Writing Task 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to invest'.
Suggestion: to invest
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...lieve that spending government funds on this phenomena is more important for a numbe...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...egin with, If more people had access to world wide net different companies could have rep...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss to world wide net different companies could have replaced their business with ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...st search the key world and click enter.It is very clear to see why people prefer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87132352941 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71885626508 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4528425915 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230855564554 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751773355815 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540903066111 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110530838475 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631164813056 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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