While the passage states that rising taxes on cigarrete can be helpful , the lecture expresses a different point of view.
First,the passage claims that imposing high taxes on cigarettes may push smokers to buy less packs and will lead them to smoke less often resulting in a healthier life style. However the lecture states that the higher the prices are the more the customers are urged to buy more dangerous product with less quality , which not only it will result in more diseases and health risks but , it is also unfair for low income employers because higher taxes are greater expenses for them rather than it is for wealthy people.
Secondly, the passage asserts that the government can obtain the money and spend it in projects which benefits the society.Although , the lecture claims that this will lead to the government being dependant on this income and so it may stop trying to forbid smoking in places like public parks or buildings.
To sum up, the women from the lecture disagrees with the passage reasons to rise taxes on people who smoke the cigarrete
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rising taxes on cigarrete can be helpful , the lecture expresses a different point...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...sses a different point of view. First,the passage claims that imposing high taxes...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun packs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s on cigarettes may push smokers to buy less packs and will lead them to smoke less ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...en resulting in a healthier life style. However the lecture states that the higher the ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the more the customers are urged to buy more dangerous product with less quality...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...more dangerous product with less quality , which not only it will result in more ...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct with less quality , which not only it will result in more diseases and health ...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lt in more diseases and health risks but , it is also unfair for low income employ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... in projects which benefits the society.Although , the lecture claims that this will lea...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ects which benefits the society.Although , the lecture claims that this will lead ...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
... this will lead to the government being dependant on this income and so it may stop tryin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1373.03311258 65% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88524590164 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40095637097 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.47835731 49.2860985944 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.8 110.228320801 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06452816374 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249842457211 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137538459163 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275974839474 0.0662205650399 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146291913337 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026020425703 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.3589403974 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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