Yes I agree with the following statement, youngster are not showing their interest to improve their communities. To support my statements, I have lot of reason and evidence to state that young people of today's generation not contributing their effort for social welfare activities.
Firstly, today's generation always they spending their most valuable infront of the computer to chat with girl friends and their close friends and very few of them only using the internet and other social medial to improve and share their knowledge with other, may be 2 to 3 percentage but remaining all others simply wasting precious times in meaningless chatting.
Secondly, earlier young people use to participate in the festival programmes and they use to celebrate the festival grandly and memorable ways. For example new year festival our batch mate use to clean the street and contacting the cultural programmes and so on. But now a day's generation they arranging the kind of events. These are the main festival shows our culture and tradition. If they continuing this eventually our cultural value and norms will vanish one day. They should think that this there responsibility.They should not be selfish.
Thirdly, previously the youngster never went to the disco club, gambling, casino, bar and races but now a days generation learned or influenced by others culture and spoiling their life as well as spoiling their community. This must be stopped at any cost because these kind bad activities leads community in worst events. For example if they are not capable improve the community how they are going help the nation tomorrow.
Finally, the new generation started doing illegal business like drugs and smuggling and so on, they started looking for short cut to come up in their life which every bad things happening today.
So I want to conclude that today's young generation simply wasting their valuable time by meaningless chatting, they are going against the social norms, they becoming criminals and doing illegal activities. Further more they are not realising their duty and responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ealising their duty and responsibility.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253926701571 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.141361256545 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785340314136 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0759162303665 0.046263068375 164% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0785340314136 0.0685040099705 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0785340314136 0.118717715034 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0549738219895 0.0351676179071 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80380355584 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314136125654 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00261780104712 0.00188951952338 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0680628272251 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130890052356 0.0209618222197 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00523560209424 0.0139019557991 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2148.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3550295858 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37573964497 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310650887574 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218934911243 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150887573964 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80380355584 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 63.3782652864 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5333333333 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4571935876 48.84282405 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.2 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.06666666667 0.644075263715 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.5984220907 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.30973451327 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156642996108 0.300154397459 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110756948148 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0900699184896 0.0752933317313 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601793606595 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.218913215272 0.151897553556 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066159326192 0.114077575197 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058752142048 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262291368778 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0525334252008 0.067059652881 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10788362569 0.210909579961 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665739800215 0.0618886996521 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 21 Out of 30