TPO9Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Personally
...effect of technology upon young people. personally, i disagree with point that technology ...
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...chnology upon young people. personally, i disagree with point that technology has...
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Suggestion: I
...hnology has made children less creative.I feel this way for two reasons, which i ...
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....I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Suggestion: My
...g they spend more effort in creativity. my personal experience is a compelling exa...
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...ng example of this, when iwas at school i used to use computer for every subject ...
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... used to use computer for every subject i took and these informations help me to ...
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...lp me to be more counsious about things i studied and easily provides me a variou...
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... built my own base about subject and so i became more creative in my pattern of s...
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Suggestion: , pictures
...ives a huge system of interactive videos,pictures,and samples of things that is hard to f...
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Suggestion: , thoughts
...y uses them for generating his own ideas,thoughts that may at the end makes him more crea...
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Suggestion: ,
...re creative and selfesteamd. For instant , when i was 10 years old i used to watch...
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.... For instant , when i was 10 years old i used to watch videos about how things m...
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Suggestion: I
...evsion or phone. In conclusion, i am of the openion that technology helps...
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Suggestion: big
... wonderful system of informations and a big big base of helpfull videos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05363984674 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05469439682 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.942528633 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.428571429 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824874883351 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391824332174 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381875640439 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540940214434 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03089463395 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 58.1214874552 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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