traveling toa different country can be both exciting and frustrating at athe same time. what are the most important pieces of advice that you would give visitors coming to your country? give reasons and details to support your response.
Traveling as a tourist is one of the desires of many people. Normally people consider traveling as a good event, Albeit sometimes this experience can be frustrating and bothering. If a person asks me some advices to avoid undesirable consequences of tourism, I will give him some hints as below.
First of all and foremost, when a person wants to travel to a foreign country, he should know where he is going. Your choice is the chief decision that you should make. Some places and countries may be not suitable for some people. To make a good decision you should gather information about the country that you want to travel. The best way to collecting information is internet sites. You can see pictures of the country that you want to visit and read other tourist's ideas about that place.
Second, after you choose where you want to go, I propose to hire an experienced tourism agency. It can reserve suitable and convenient hotel and charter fly for you by a discounted price. Then when you arrived to your destination, you are relief and your place and plan are scheduled be for . These agencies also can help you about places that are more popular for tourists and can take you there by certain vehicles that are devoted for tourists.
In addition, I suggest you to learn some useful words and sentences in the language of the country that you are going there. Because this will help you to communicate with the native people in immediate situations and get necessary information. Furthermore, knowing every culture's language can help you to perceive its culture.
Finally get some information about foods in your aimed country. If you do not be convenient with the foods it will roughly be impossible to enjoy your travel.
These suggestions are my advices that I can give you before traveling to my country or any country to have an exciting not frustrating trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...your place and plan are scheduled be for . These agencies also can help you about ...
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...vehicles that are devoted for tourists. In addition, I suggest you to learn some...
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... can help you to perceive its culture. Finally get some information about foods in you...
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...tion about foods in your aimed country. If you do not be convenient with the foods...
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... have an exciting not frustrating trip.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201704545455 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.176136363636 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0795454545455 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0284090909091 0.046263068375 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102272727273 0.0685040099705 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0965909090909 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0284090909091 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61609764036 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0454545454545 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0397727272727 0.0209618222197 190% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0227272727273 0.0139019557991 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1884.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79692307692 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332307692308 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255384615385 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166153846154 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101538461538 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61609764036 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.4630408284 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1052631579 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4389807002 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 42.6437246964 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.06481481481 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409551164729 0.300154397459 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105004545516 0.103427244359 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708366678289 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571536161942 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163667372097 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147424206409 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667082892688 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.238298093359 0.336927656856 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.093367341688 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235544508567 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515241846285 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.