In twenty years, there will be fewer cars than there are today!
I disagree that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are now. Transportation is always a serious problem for everyone of us. We've been pursuing various convenient ways to get from one place to another. The invention and use of cars tremendously improved our life standard and make a lot of things much more efficient. So, I do believe even twenty years later, cars will be still as popular as they are now.
Firstly, cars are becoming a very convenient and affordable vehicle for us today. When I was born, my father bought a motor bike, which seemed like a cool decision. 20 years later since then, more and more people are able to buy new cars and drive to work, to home or to travel, instead of taking public transportation all the time. Comparing to stand or sit in a crowded bus or metro, drive our own cars provided us much better experience and make to the destinations much fast. Therefore, in twenty years I still believe cars will be in use for a lot of people.
Secondly, with the technology, cars will become more environment-friendly and easier to manipulate. I remember when my brother took driving test, most cars were not automatic. When I started to practice driving, I can chose automatically driving, which is much easier to master for everyone, especially girls. In market we can see most of cars are automatic brand. In two decades, I am sure there are new techniques can produce cars not only more convenient to drive but also more ecosystem-friendly.
Even though, for most people's pespective, more cars means more pollution, which is bad for our environment and threaten our health. But fortunately we can reduce it by improving the technology.
To conclude, cars provide us with convenience and efficiency and in the future, it will be the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: We've
...s a serious problem for everyone of us. Weve been pursuing various convenient ways t...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...en I started to practice driving, I can chose automatically driving, which is much ea...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cars') or simply say ''most cars''.
Suggestion: most of the cars; most cars
... especially girls. In market we can see most of cars are automatic brand. In two decades, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76677316294 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91064658601 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4008826643 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34529533414 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11844196568 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163538293824 0.0737576698707 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1926594627 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124596994564 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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