Nowadays, Automobiles are becoming more essential vehicles among people. It makes transport more available and easy. Everyone is using cars as a daily transition. In my view, there is no possibility to reduce the number of cars will be fewer after twenty years than two for some reasons.
The main reason is that cars are the main vehicle as public or personal transportation because its price is decreasing according to the development of technology. In the modern age, cars are available everywhere at a low price than the previous time. In addition, people are becoming richer and they want more comfortable transport to make their life easier. For example, in my office, most of my colleagues are buying cars for them after their wage increment. They are earning more money and ease their transportation by buying cars. As we can see that if this will be going to happen regularly then there is a very low possibility to decrease the number of cars.
Another reason is that using personal cars will help to save traveling time to everywhere. If someone uses one's own vehicle, it will save some time. Because it is time-consuming to use public transport for traveling. One may fail to attend an emergency meeting because of being late. Even you can't ensure the availability of public transportation. So, everyone who is able to buy a car will buy one. For instance, my neighbor bought a car because once he lost a job for being late to attend a meeting. He used to use public transport to go to work. Now he is using his personal cars so that he will able to go everywhere in time. This example demonstrated that there is a huge possibility to increase the number of automobiles in the near future.
Moreover, buying a new car is becoming a tradition for wealthy people because of family status. To cope with high status and maintain their position they have to buy new cars. In my village, there are some wealthy persons who are in competition on buying new cars to prove their status among them. This experience taught me that there no chance to reduce cars in twenty years.
In sum, some may agree that there will be fewer cars in twenty years that today, but there is no possibility to happen this. Not only people will buy cars for low cost and saving time but also for keeping the high status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...meeting because of being late. Even you cant ensure the availability of public trans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67892156863 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6302285856 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5311739808 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4230769231 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349753431303 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968012164297 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108734215392 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223489701469 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113823657633 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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