In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
In the foreseeing future, there are going to be more cars in use in the world, in my opinion. many people drive to school or drive to work by daily basis and the population on earth is still growing. So, the need of cars should be at much higher level, which would encourage car makers to produce more cars for people.
Additionally, the growing population not only happens in the country but also in the city. that cause more needs for living place and consequently brings the rent price to a higher place. And unacceptable rent price force people moving from the city to the suburban area. Without the supports of the downtown subway system, they need to buy a car for transportation. As long as the problems exist, there are going to be more people driving.
The relatively lower car price also help the trend. car makers, like Toyota, are work their best to reduce the cost by inroducing automatic production, whch means produce cars by robots. The prevalent use of robots make the car price being at a lower price compare with the price twenty years before. As more people can afford the price of a car, more cars would be sold. In fact, over twenty million cars were sold last year and still growing at a steady speed.
Moreover, autopilot systems were being developed and embedded in cars. In the next twenty years, the self drive mode would be installed in most of the cars being sold. driving on roads will be much easier and safer than today. Even those who do not drive would want to buy a car and let the car drive by itself.
The number of cars in use will probably not be fewer but more than today due to reasons above. Although, we do not know exactly what things may happen in the future, many market analysis support the statement that there will be more demand of cars for sure. And what might also interest us is that how many the car sale will increase in twenty years?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...ars in use in the world, in my opinion. many people drive to school or drive to work...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ns in the country but also in the city. that cause more needs for living place and c...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Car
...ly lower car price also help the trend. car makers, like Toyota, are work their bes...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Driving
...stalled in most of the cars being sold. driving on roads will be much easier and safer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, may, moreover, so, still, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52023121387 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19804480899 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520231213873 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7751892021 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415600753362 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126746877177 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117012923746 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23512644695 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121843974127 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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