In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
The traveling makes more comfortable the life by using vehicle. Personally, I believe that few vehicles use in the in twenty years than now. I feel this way two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in old days there are very few vehicles in the area. Nowadays number of vehicles are more than people live in the any area. The air is polluted by vehicle fog. Nowadays our environment pollution is increase by vehicle fog. It is cause for skin cancers. But in twenties, there are no air pollution and had clean environment to breath. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Nowadays Colombo area in Sri Lanka has covered with smog. The are many announcements are informing to wear mask while travelling in this area. So, these days we are wearing mask if we go out side the office. Also, these days virus cough, skin alleges are increase in this area.
Secondly, these days increase traffic by increasing the vehicles. But old days people have to freely travel in any place by with out traffic. These days take more time to travel than work. Also, every house has even one vehicle and some houses have many vehicles than who is people live in there. For instance, in my home, there are for people and there are for cars. Also, when I go to work, I spend two hours to travel to my office. But actually, its take only forty-five minutes when traffic is not there. My father told, they were go to Colombo to Kandy with in one and half hours in old days. But nowadays its take three to four hours.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that these days have more vehicle than old days. This is because air pollution increase by vehicle fog and nowadays have more traffic in the roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rea in Sri Lanka has covered with smog. The are many announcements are informing to wea...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'inform' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wearing
...he are many announcements are informing to wear mask while travelling in this area. So,...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...these days we are wearing mask if we go out side the office. Also, these days virus...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...these days we are wearing mask if we go out side the office. Also, these days virus coug...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... we go out side the office. Also, these days virus cough, skin alleges are increase ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...e have to freely travel in any place by with out traffic. These days take more time to t...
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Line 9, column 536, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...is not there. My father told, they were go to Colombo to Kandy with in one and hal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55910543131 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30448238867 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482428115016 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8354254225 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.08 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.52 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0674932218049 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215725953854 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441059256257 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656429577186 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715212884217 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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