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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

The discussion about whether or not the use of number of cars within twenty years is a very controversial discussion. There are people on both side of the policy who have very strong feelings. Some people feel that the number of cars will be decreased in twenty years, but most believe that the number of cars will be increased dramatically with this time range. However, if I were forced to chose, I would raise my voice for that the number of cars must increase. It is my firm belief that in twenty years the cars numbers increase in high rate due to several reasons. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin with, one of the reasons for my specific thought is that the number of population is increasing rapidly. So for fulfilling the needs of such population the number of cars also increasing. People will be faster with respect to time in future and for this reason they will require fast and more cars. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experiences. Five years ago when I was a student in the university , I went to campus by using public train but now due to improvement of road construction most of the people use their personal cars. Now I also use personal car for going to office. If the car numbers are not increased within five years I never would have used the personal car that is gifted from my office.

Secondly, why I illustrate the specific concept is that due to the improvement of technology the availability of cars increases greatly. Therefore, the cars number also increase within twenty years. The price of cars also will decrease due to boon of technology. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. When I was a student in school, our family had a car which was very prestigious and precious in that time. In our residential area, only few families have car due to higher price. However, within ten years, the price of cars has decreased dramatically and the most of the families have new cars today. If this tradition has been run the number of cars will be very high than now.

In conclusion, in light of the above reasons, I strongly believe that the number of cars will be increased rapidly within twenty years. This is because to fulfill the increased population need and availability of higher technology.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58695652174 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55770641796 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405797101449 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 414.0 20.1344086022 2056% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1899.0 100.406767564 1891% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 414.0 20.6045352989 2009% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 5.45110844103 1871% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366675864495 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.366675864495 0.076458572812 480% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255319518097 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453975398671 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 207.2 11.7677419355 1761% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -340.27 58.1214874552 -585% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 163.6 10.1575268817 1611% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.82 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.57 8.01818996416 331% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 167.6 10.0537634409 1667% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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