uniform
There is bone of contention regarding the vitality of uniform, some corroborate the emphasis of uniform by considering it as a symbol of discipline, while protesters criticize it by mentioning that it is obscuring personal dressing habits. In my perspective, uniform is indispensible for the following reasons in the academic, defense system, business field.
It is certainly true that some school students will be treated in a condescending manner because of their tawdry outfits. For instance sophisticated students may deny to share their lunch or to play with the poor students. Moreover, some teachers may not give much attention to students belonging to low social and economic condition. So to alleviate this miserable condition, school principal should impose rule of wearing uniform, as uniform is a symbol of tantamount and discipline.
I would like to scrutinize the significance of uniform in defense system. Uniform among military soldiers and police inspectors cultivate feeling of spirit and passion towards the nation. In addition, uniform reminds them their obligations so they fight with more audaciousness and temerity with enemy. So my opinion that uniform is crucial is corroborated.
Another reason is, at work place is uniform is suggesting the thoughts of an owner. If uniform is mandatory in any company, then that company’s owner is benign as he considers his employees far from the basis of racial discrimination. Furthermore, by such dress code camaraderie between workers can be easily sustained and thereby without any distress the proficiency of workers tempted to ameliorate. As a consequence uniform may act as blessing in disguise in business sphere. How can I forget doctors? They are welcomed with reverence by speculating their uniform-apron from a distance.
On contrary impedance-supporters may suffer from the loss of privilege of dressing ostentiously at workplace, but we can’t overlook tremendous benefits of uniform. As a result its fruitful effects outweigh its disadvantages buttressing my opinion.
Summarizing, after probing various spheres such as school, defense system, and work place there is hardly any flaw in the prompt that uniform is crucial in placating the relations between people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a condescending manner" with adverb for "condescending"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...at some school students will be treated in a condescending manner because of their tawdry outfits. For in...
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Line 8, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...verlook tremendous benefits of uniform. As a result its fruitful effects outweigh ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5652173913 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23306795759 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614492753623 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4295674604 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.052631579 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48169541239 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160674621953 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12035731768 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257134036288 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110436983143 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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